Wednesday, May 10, 2017

Hailey's Novel Diary – 5/10/17

I just wrote a pool scene that I'll probably cut out. It tells you something about the three characters in it, but there's something about it I don't like.

It's essentially the characters playing truth or dare. There's some foreshadowing in there that I want to keep, but I don't like how it reads like a 1980s teen movie. I haven't decided if this story takes place in the past, but even if it does, it's not that far back. At most, some of them were born in the '80s.


Porky's
Directed by Bob Clark
© 1981 20th Century Fox

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