Hailey's Novel Diary – 5/10/17

I just wrote a pool scene that I will probably cut out. It tells you something about the three characters in it, but there is something about it that I don't like.

The scene is essentially the characters playing truth or dare. There is some foreshadowing in there that I want to keep, but I don't like how it reads like a 1980s teen movie. I have not decided if this story takes place in the past, but even if it does, it will not be that far back. At most, it will be 1990s-2000s. Maybe some of the younger characters were born in the '80s.

Porky's
Directed by Bob Clark
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